Michiko Kakutani slams the awful writing of John Grisham

 


Michiko Kakutani slices and dices popular hack scribbler John Grisham in her scorching NYT review back in 1995. Go get 'em, Michiko!

THE RAINMAKER By John Grisham

Part of the appeal of John Grisham's humongously popular novels has always rested in their grabby beginnings, their twisty, if disorganized, plots. Unlike Scott Turow, Mr. Grisham has never excelled at creating psychologically nuanced characters or used anything but the most pedestrian prose. His latest book, "The Rainmaker," lacks even his patented narrative hooks. The novel gets off to a plodding, colorless start, decelerates into a wholly predictable tale of David and Goliath, and finishes up with a manic flurry of ridiculously implausible events including, in the last 30 pages alone, a crucial court decision, a sudden murder, the loss of millions of dollars, the revelation of a money-skimming scam and the abrupt decision on the part of the hero and heroine to start completely new lives.

Given such weaknesses, why do Mr. Grisham's novels routinely zoom to the top of the best-seller lists? Much of his success, of course, has to do with his subject matter. In recent years, the law and lawyers have taken center stage in American life: a development attested to not only by the high visibility of trials involving O. J. Simpson, the Menendez brothers, Lorena Bobbitt and other cases broadcast on CNN and Court TV, but also by the increasingly noisy public debate over individual rights and responsibilities, freedoms and regulations.

Mr. Grisham has cashed in on our society's simultaneous suspicion of and dependency on lawyers by giving the reader a seemingly intimate look at their rarefied world. In "The Rainmaker," he peppers his story with lots of behind-the-scenes glimpses of courtroom maneuverings and informative little asides about the psychology of defense motions, plea-bargaining and jury selection. ("It's ancient wisdom that blacks make better plaintiff's jurors," he writes. "They feel for the underdog and distrust white corporate America.") His portraits of individual lawyers in this novel also clumsily play into our eagerness to see members of this profession in simple terms of good and evil, crusading idealism and withering cynicism.

On one hand, "The Rainmaker" is filled with slimy hustlers: ambulance chasers on the lookout for "good injuries" and conniving corporate apologists with old-boy network connections to morally compromised judges. On the other hand, its narrator and hero, Rudy Baylor, is a bright young lawyer who devotes himself to defending the rights of a terminally ill leukemia victim against the scheming representatives of a corrupt insurance company. Like many a Capra hero before him, Rudy is an emissary of the little man, David pitted against a bureaucratic giant.

Rudy, the reader quickly realizes, is also a close relative of two earlier Grisham characters: Darby Shaw, the brilliant law student who helps uncover a nefarious assassination plot in "The Pelican Brief," and Mitch McDeere, the recent law school graduate in "The Firm," who finds himself in a high-paying but highly dangerous job with a Mafia-sponsored firm.

In many ways, Rudy is Mitch's alter ego: poor, whereas Mitch is prosperous; desperate for work after graduating from a small-time law school, whereas Mitch is the much-courted graduate of Harvard. Unfortunately for the reader, there isn't much more to Rudy's character, and for the time being no actor like Tom Cruise to flesh out his personality even marginally. Indeed, Rudy is defined almost entirely by external events: he's in debt and unemployed; he has a lousy car and no place to live. After law school, he knocks on a lot of doors in an effort to find a job and ends up working for a dubious lawyer with the even more dubious name of Bruiser Stone, who posts him at a Memphis hospital to try to sign up fresh new accident victims. We are supposed to like Rudy because he's patronized by Ivy League types, because he's been dumped by his former girlfriend and because he dreams of being "an instant rainmaker, a bright young star with a golden touch."

Rudy's first big case involves Donny Ray Black, a young man with acute leukemia, who is on the verge of dying because his insurance company has refused to pay for a bone marrow transplant. Rudy files suit on behalf of Donny Ray and his parents and, in his very first courtroom appearance, finds himself up against one of Memphis's most legendary lawyers and his backup team of assistants. There is not a moment of doubt, however, as to the outcome of this case: the reader knows from the instant Donny Ray's story has been described, which happens on page 14, exactly what will happen. It only takes Mr. Grisham 400 pages or so to get there.

In a desperate effort to liven up his story, Mr. Grisham tosses the reader a veritable school of red herrings: a supposedly rich and lonely old widow who asks Rudy to draw up her will, a mysterious case of arson in which Rudy is a suspect, a lucrative scheme involving topless bars, a romance with a beautiful woman who is being stalked by her abusive husband, and an assortment of subsidiary cases involving accident victims and walk-in referrals.

Mr. Grisham makes only the most perfunctory effort to tie all these elements together into a coherent plot and makes even less of an attempt to relate them in an interesting or believable fashion. His dialogue tends to consist of people trading cliches like "take the money and run" and "save the best for last." One fairly typical exchange between Rudy and his girlfriend goes like this:

SHE: "I'd like to see mountains."

HE: "Me too. East or West?"

SHE: "Big mountains."

HE: "Then West it is."

SHE: "I want to see snow.'

HE: "I think we can find some."

This conversation occurs near the end of "The Rainmaker." Given the leadenness of Mr. Grisham's prose, the banality of his characters and the shocking predictability of his story, it's hard to imagine how many readers will have made it this far.

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